tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post2525632688089129659..comments2023-06-06T12:31:15.401-02:30Comments on The Stories of Medusa: Head-Hopping!Snazelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13067811993687045270noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post-11068760287955604422010-02-14T23:08:39.182-03:302010-02-14T23:08:39.182-03:30Whee! Oh terror.Whee! Oh terror.Snazelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13067811993687045270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post-21623636856103227942010-02-14T23:06:26.736-03:302010-02-14T23:06:26.736-03:30Sure, though I'd probably only do in-depth lin...Sure, though I'd probably only do in-depth line edits on the first couple chapters' worth, and then revert to larger scale comments and questions (after a certain point, line-editing is most useful in the polishing phase, when one is done ripping out or putting in characters/scenes/plotlines).<br /><br />Bring on the story! :DSpartezdahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484696208117881540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post-42493439380030695202010-02-14T22:46:45.377-03:302010-02-14T22:46:45.377-03:30Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Uh. Well. I am weak and desire c...Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Uh. Well. I am weak and desire crits. Would you WANT a half-written story, to be updated as I can churn out the updates? *unsure Snazel is unsure*Snazelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13067811993687045270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post-83774769663842709672010-02-14T21:09:20.802-03:302010-02-14T21:09:20.802-03:30Heee. For me the general progression is "How...Heee. For me the general progression is "How DARE you think my baby isn't perfect!" to "Okay, you might have a point...maybe...I <i>guess</i>" to "Oh God I suck and everything I touch sucks and I will DIE SWALLOWED BY A SELF-INDUCED BLACK HOLE" to "I have to write again, even if it's garbage...here goes..." to "You know, this isn't as bad Spartezdahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484696208117881540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post-21916668713576063702010-02-14T20:52:30.423-03:302010-02-14T20:52:30.423-03:30Oh, yes! I just have to, uh, finish it first. *cou...Oh, yes! I just have to, uh, finish it first. *cough* I really do not do this often. The standard procedure is to crit an entire story, yes? <br /><br />(And I'd LOVE to have you crit it. I might hate you for a week afterwards and week copiously into my pillow, but in the end I'd be fine. I'm sure. *tentative smile*)Snazelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13067811993687045270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post-91175628059917077002010-02-14T20:47:46.320-03:302010-02-14T20:47:46.320-03:30Are you planning to put it up for crit anywhere, o...Are you planning to put it up for crit anywhere, once you get to the editing stage? Because when I take a liking to something, I get the itch to slash it apart, rearrange the strips, and present the bleeding mass back to the author while beaming deliriously (Merc can attest to this). Gratuitous use of footnotes may be involved. O:)<br /><br />*smiles at the excerpt in a totally non-bloodthirstySpartezdahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484696208117881540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post-86941692162464457692010-02-14T20:41:31.201-03:302010-02-14T20:41:31.201-03:30*beams* Thank you for your, uh, petting. *cough* A...*beams* Thank you for your, uh, petting. *cough* AHEM. Yes, I need to finish writing the keening thing, and then learn how to edit- but once that little thing is done I think it shall be VERY yummy! :D I'm glad you like.Snazelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13067811993687045270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147716641797854066.post-8630935136654186102010-02-14T20:37:28.005-03:302010-02-14T20:37:28.005-03:30Huh, nice. I think that could definitely be smoot...Huh, nice. I think that could definitely be smoothed out yummily. Five different POVs would be if they each had separate sections where their perceptions/narration weren't interrupted by any other character's. You seem to naturally gravitate to omni POV, which is awesome--I <i>adore</i> well-done omni, but none of my ideas have presented themselves in it yet, alas.<br /><br />*pets theSpartezdahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484696208117881540noreply@blogger.com